VIJAYA– It’s Different!!!

Posted: August 10, 2007 in Creative

The cbse result website glared back at her from her pc screen. She had
never anticipated failing, never in her dreams. She thought of all who had
topped the exams. She still couldnt believe it. She had always been a topper. But this time she had
been apprehensive. Her papers werent dat gud. But everyone still expected her to have
broken all records. Family, Teachers, School, District, City et al. She desperately wished she
somehow got better grades. They wished she
could meet them and share her feelings. But she never did. Her divorced parents wished hopelessly she
would forgive their negligience all the way. She could never tell if she
would, one day. She
was angry with them. As she thought of them, she
felt a drop trickle down her eye. She couldn’t take it any more. And then, she
heard the school principal announce the topper’s name, she
thought of her name, and
wondered at the strange coincidence.VIJAYA.
as the school principal spoke, she reflected back at her life in one moment. She..

Incase, u r still wondering wat happened to Vijaya afterwords, u dint really see the difference.
Read it again, this time, read this colored lines first and then go back to this colored ones.

PS: I promise i m never goin to write such stuff again. It took such a heavy toll on me, i cant explain, and not jus’ timewise.

  1. Nitin bansal says:

    Its different !!!!!


  2. rohitpruthi says:

    Mann .. !this is amazing .. the best creative writing could ever get … 🙂

    And do not stick to your promise .. 😛 write more of the ‘different’

  3. Mohit Jain says:

    @ bansal
    Thanx yar..:)
    sahi mein sochne mein to aasan lag raha tha par likhne mein bht mushkil tha.

    @ pruthi
    thanx for d encouragement.. 🙂
    i would love to..(coz i m so pleased wid the end result) i wonder if i can again !!

  4. aditi says:

    hey its great :))
    totally different idea!!!

  5. neha says:

    three words…OMG…now thats what’s called “creative writing”
    really today is turning out to be an interestingly different blog day..keep up 🙂

  6. Rohit Moghe says:

    Marvelous..bravo mi boy!

  7. VDG says:

    Whoa… lovely
    PS: Who is Vijaya 😛
    PPS: I want to read the slam book entries too 😀

  8. Mayank Bishnoi says:

    wow sir…u took blog writing to the nxt level..

    its really so captivating…keep it up

  9. Mohit Jain says:

    @ aditi
    u always inspire me dear. thanx 🙂

    thanx..hey why dont u give me link of some gud blogs..

    @ VDG
    i vl mail u d scrapbuk..hav fun readin it !!

    @ moji, mayank
    i keep trying man..!!!
    thanx 🙂

  10. rohan says:

    light blue or dark blue who could tell the difference

  11. Aekta says:

    hey! t to kuch alag hi nikla yaar..u write amazing….i mean it…its cool and so deep….

  12. Mohit Jain says:

    Thanks a lot:)

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