Spell My Love ♫

Posted: September 29, 2007 in Poetry, Romance
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It’s been ages since I last posted. At least, it seems so to me. I am back with my favorite theme ‘Romance’. But this time, it’s special. It’s been jus’ 2 minutes , i keyed in the last words of my first ever love song, something i had been longing to do. And here goes the reprint of it, straight-lifted from my notepad file, in two quick keystrokes.

Oh! u cant spell my love..
Oh! u cant spell my love..

even if
u knew every word
obsolete or absurd
ever-spoken ever-heard

even if u tried hard enough
u jus’ cant spell my love

how completely u rule over my senses
u r compellin’ me to step beyond my fences
oh baby, i have lost control
since the day u stole
my heart out of my hearty defenses

oh princess !!
u cud rule over me
play with my destiny
u cud know me head to heel

but u cant spell my love..

even if u tried hard enough
u jus’ cant spell my love

i act a crazy kid, forever, lost in ur thought
lemme remind u gal, however,crazy, i m not
i am jus’ a bloke in love
in ur smokin’ love
thanks to all the smiles u have brought

oh girl !!
u cud charm me around
in all the ways u have found
u cud know me abound

but u cant spell my love..

even if
u knew every word
obsolete or absurd
ever-spoken ever-heard

even if u tried hard enough
u jus’ cant spell my love

Oh! u cant spell my love..
Oh! u cant spell my love..

P.S.: Someone with decent musical abilities, please help me complete this song. It sounds dull without the notes.

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Comments
  1. rajveer says:

    someone do him a favor, and compose this song for him, its very hummable

  2. aditi says:

    its beautiful dear!!!but sorry i can’t help u 🙂 ….
    if u gt d music…i shuld b d first one 2 hear dat…

  3. neha says:

    great poem (couldn’t think of a tune that suits it so still a poem for me!)
    hey if this is dedicated to a particular “someone” i think she’d be pretty glad to receive it 😛

  4. Mohit Jain says:

    @rajveer
    thanks 🙂

  5. Mohit Jain says:

    @aditi
    if u want to be d first one, u got to start learnin guitar, otherwise u wud b d second 😉

  6. Mohit Jain says:

    @neha
    thanks (if u find one,plz do tell me!)
    yep..it’s dedicated to a particular someone, i m jus’ a li’l ahead of time 🙂 😉

  7. Tandon says:

    romance is in the air…two gals commenting on your poem!!!u r on a roll man 🙂

  8. Mohit says:

    thanku thanku 🙂

  9. rohitpruthi says:

    I am good with music MJ .. !

    Shall I give it a try :P, though the romanticism may be discertely convoluted

  10. Mohit Jain says:

    I wud love to lend voice to ur music. We wud make a deadly duo in the MusicWorld. 😛

    Bring it ON..!!!

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